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Chapter 2: Page 65

posted August 5th, 2017, 1:07 pm


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August 5th, 2017, 1:07 pm

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Relax Commander! Its just a rock.

Or is it?

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August 5th, 2017, 6:33 pm

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Baby Luca?

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August 5th, 2017, 11:05 pm

Liv3lafLuv (Guest)

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I bet it is Luca's mother with babe!Luca... This is probably going to make me cry, is it not? ;-;

But, Baby!Luca and Young!Commander is really adorable. :3

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August 5th, 2017, 11:06 pm

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@Liv3lafLuv: Ahhh ;) No spoilers but... you mgiht just shed a tear or two

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August 7th, 2017, 2:56 am

Liv3lafLuv (Guest)

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@Mccull61: *sniffs* Damn it, Mads!! T^T

Also, is this the alien home planet?? *tilts head* It is very... orange. *wrinkles nose* LOLOL XD Orange skies also mean orange seas. ^^

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August 7th, 2017, 6:53 am

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@Liv3lafLuv: this is only a portion of it. And this portion if it is actually very very different than the rest of it :)

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August 7th, 2017, 11:53 pm

Liv3lafLuv (Guest)

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@Mccull61: *hums* Very cryptic, I see. XD

Super awkward side note: Did you see the story I did about the Commander? Just wondering and curious. C:

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August 8th, 2017, 12:05 pm

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@Liv3lafLuv: oh?????

No what story? :o

Link me!? (It's maddie)

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August 8th, 2017, 5:38 pm

Liv3lafLuv (Guest)

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@Mccull61: kekeke XD Okay, your wish is my command. :3 It has Young!Commander and Baby!Luca in it, as well as an unnamed character. It's pretty short and angsty... Enjoy! (This is my third try, hopefully the other two are not floating around cyberspace.)

(http://archiveofourown.org/works/11720577)

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August 8th, 2017, 6:32 pm

Tenshi (Guest)

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@Liv3lafLuv: it gave me feels...

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August 8th, 2017, 7:43 pm

Liv3lafLuv (Guest)

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@Tenshi: I'll take that as a compliment. XD Thanks for reading it. C:

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September 5th, 2017, 2:46 pm

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NEXT STORY ABOUT HIM PLZ, HES SO CUTE I LOVE HIM

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September 5th, 2017, 3:09 pm

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@Supersempai13: don't worry!!!! This story will have a ton of Commanders background

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